we were creating Bio poems to tell a story about ourselves. It was challenging because we had to come up with a different ideas for each line.It was fun to go back and read my story
Losa - I enjoyed reading your Bio Poem and finding out a few more things about you. It was quite challenging trying to get everything to fit on your Blog page but you have managed it quite well. We might have to re-think changing font sizes BEFORE we post. I was thinking that I might join you on your broomstick!
Hi Losa, I'm Renae from Yaldhurst Model School (YMS) This blog is interesting!!! I love how you blogged about your bio poem......but what is a Bio Poem Exactly?? A lot of the things you've written down are what I personally like!
My name is Gabriella and I am from Hay Park School. I liked the way that you are telling some things that you like and some things that you are wondering about.
Did you ever think about telling us all about yourself so that we know who you are and what you like to do? Maybe next time you should check your punctuation at the beginning of your sentences.
i hope you like my Bio poem
ReplyDeleteLosa - I enjoyed reading your Bio Poem and finding out a few more things about you. It was quite challenging trying to get everything to fit on your Blog page but you have managed it quite well. We might have to re-think changing font sizes BEFORE we post. I was thinking that I might join you on your broomstick!
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DeleteHi Losa, I am Mykiala from yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog.
I like who you put it in the blogg some other people they just put a link that doesn't work.
Next time you could tell me why you did this.
Anyway great job!
MYKIALAYMS!!!
Hi Losa, I'm Renae from Yaldhurst Model School (YMS)
ReplyDeleteThis blog is interesting!!!
I love how you blogged about your bio poem......but what is a Bio Poem Exactly??
A lot of the things you've written down are what I personally like!
Good Job by the way
Kind Reagards
-Renae
KIA ORA Losa,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Gabriella and I am from Hay Park School. I liked the way that you are telling some things that you like and some things that you are wondering about.
Did you ever think about telling us all about yourself so that we know who you are and what you like to do? Maybe next time you should check your punctuation at the beginning of your sentences.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 8 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is an amazing thing to share with everyone.
I really enjoyed reading this and you are a very talented writer!
Why did you make this?
I think one way to improve is to make your own images to go with all of this.
To do this use the line tools from google slides.
Kind Regards
-Maddie